it was a party

yesterday i woke up and got ready for school after i was ready i walked down to the caravan and woke my uncle up he got up and gave him his present it was a massive box of chocolates he loved it, it was really funny he couldnt open the packet so we all just walked off.

shari and i went to school then came home.

we got home and no one was home we asked everyone were they were they told us that they were fishing they all came home and we all went out across river to go for another fish we were catching so many fish then all of a sudden we saw a fox so me and shari went to go and have a look at it he was so pretty i got like a metre away from him i was walking with him all along the reef he would stop and would catch a few crabs and eat them i tried to catch one but it nipped me it hurt then we all went home it was great i hope i do it again..

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  1. Once again Luwana, you have written a delightful story.
    However, there is not one capital letter or full stop in sight! You MUST, MUST, MUST start every sentence with a capital letter and end each sentence with a full stop. For example-
    Yesterday I woke up and got ready for school. After I was ready……

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