on the weekend i had visitors up from magaret river we hadn’t seen these visitors in 7 years they get really fun to play with. we went swimming at jaques and i took alot of pictures and videos with my 4k action sport camera the 2 boys love surfing and the girl she loves swimming like my sister and i. after jaques we went to the river on a stand up paddle board the 2 boys are really annoying at times they tipped us girls off we were planning on crossing the river all dry. after we got tipped off we got back on and and kept on going i ended up falling off and the girls didnt know that i fell off so they kept on going i had to chase them by swimming all the way across river it was annoying cause they started heading back and then came and picked me up i said “why did you leave me behind” the girls said “we thaught you were still on” so then we all went in, it was really funny. us girls ran off straight away so the boys would take everything home not us.
Luwana,
Sounds like fun!
As I said to William, it is very important to EDIT your work before you cut and paste to the blog.
Type it up in a Word document then go through and read your work aloud, putting in CAPITAL LETTERS at the beginning of each sentence and at Proper Nouns like names of people and places. Put a full stop at the end of each sentence. Otherwise it does not read properly.
When you write your next blog post on Word, print it out and bring it to me so that we can edit it together.